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I’m running grammar check on a story, Vanessa’s Affair, and there’s a line from a passage where she is enjoying her husband’s company after violating her marriage vows. The line currently reads:

God, and Vanessa loved it.

It was suggested I remove the comma:

God and Vanessa loved it.

I’m pretty sure that would be incorrect. If anything, I would propose God would be indifferent. I mean, God has better things to do than hang out in the bedrooms of perverts.